Marathon

🏃‍♂️ MARATHON: The Messenger of Victory

Movie Treatment

Logline

In 490 B.C., as the mighty Persian war machine bears down on Athens, a young, extraordinary messenger must run an impossible distance through a war-torn land to rally crucial Spartan aid and, ultimately, deliver the definitive message of victory that will forge a lasting legacy.

Genre

Historical Epic, War Drama, Thriller

Tone

Gritty and visceral, yet inspirational. Focuses on the physical and psychological toll of extreme endurance and the desperate stakes of a nascent democracy.

Protagonist

PHEIDIPPIDES (Timothée Chalamet): A hemerodromos (day-long runner/messenger) for the Athenian military. He is wiry, intense, and possesses an almost supernatural endurance. Haunted by the weight of the messages he carries, he is not a warrior but a lifeline—a man who uses speed, not a spear, to serve his city.

Synopsis


Part I: The Race to Sparta (The Impossible Task)

The film opens with the stark reality of the Persian invasion. General MILTIADES (a seasoned, stoic commander) is desperate. The Athenian army is outnumbered and awaiting the inevitable clash at the plains of Marathon. Their only hope lies in aid from their Spartan allies.

Miltiades entrusts the most critical mission to Pheidippides: run to Sparta, a distance of over 140 miles, and convince them to send their famed army immediately.

  • The Run Begins: Pheidippides sets off, the fate of Athens strapped to his back. The journey is a grueling race against the clock. We witness his extraordinary physical resilience—the rhythmic pounding of his feet against the rough path, the agony in his muscles.
  • Encounters: Along the way, he endures harsh weather, meager rations, and encounters the brutal remnants of the Persian advance. A key scene involves a chilling, surreal encounter with the god Pan (as hinted in the myth) in the desolate mountains of Arcadia, who chastises the Athenians for their neglect and promises his aid in the coming battle.
  • Sparta’s Refusal: Upon reaching Sparta, utterly exhausted, Pheidippides delivers his plea to the Spartan leaders. To his crushing disappointment, they refuse, citing their sacred religious law (the Carneia festival) preventing them from marching until the next full moon. Pheidippides’s journey was for nothing. He collapses, physically and emotionally broken.

Part II: The Battle of Marathon (The Grinding Wait)

Pheidippides is ordered to return to Marathon with the devastating news. This return journey is slower, weighted with despair.

  • The Waiting Game: He arrives back at Marathon just as the outnumbered Athenian army, spurred by the Spartan refusal, prepares for the battle. Miltiades, recognizing Pheidippides’s determination, sees a different kind of value in him: the will of Athens.
  • The Battle: The ensuing Battle of Marathon is depicted as a swift, brutal, and strategically brilliant clash. We see the hoplites’ Phalanx formation in action, specifically Miltiades’s flanking maneuver that shatters the Persian ranks. Pheidippides is a witness—not a fighter—watching the chaotic slaughter from the ridge, a terrifying spectacle that fuels his final resolve.
  • The Victory: The Athenians achieve an improbable victory, but their relief is short-lived. The surviving Persian fleet is now racing to the undefended city of Athens, hoping to sack it before the victorious army can return.

Part III: The Final Message (The Ultimate Sacrifice)

Miltiades needs to get a message to Athens to hold out and not surrender, to let them know the army is marching home. But there is no time. The army must move at a forced march; there is only one man who can potentially beat the fleet.

  • The Second Run: Pheidippides, barely recovered from his 300-mile round trip, volunteers. This is his defining moment. The urgency is greater than ever; this is not about securing aid, but saving an entire city from enslavement.
  • The Breaking Point: This final, approximately 26-mile run is pure, agonizing desperation. He runs on willpower alone, hallucinations blurring the path, his body failing with every stride. The camera emphasizes the raw physical breakdown, the ragged breathing, the bloodied feet.
  • The Deliverance: He bursts through the gates of the Athenian Agora, a ragged phantom in the dust. The citizens turn, hope and terror etched on their faces. With his last, dying breath, he delivers the single, iconic Greek word: “Νενικήκαμεν!” (Nenikēkamen! — “We have won!”)
  • The Legacy: He collapses and dies. His final act saves Athens; the citizens hold fast. Moments later, the Athenian army arrives, blocking the Persian advance. The Persian commander, seeing the victorious army already there, gives up and retreats.

Closing Image

A slow, reverent shot of the sun setting over the plains of Marathon, with the camera focused on the lone, small marker commemorating the messenger, whose single run defined both the battle’s success and the future of a civilization.


Director & Casting Notes

  • Director: (Faux credit from poster: Christopher Nolan) or a director known for immersive physical epics (e.g., Ridley Scott, Denis Villeneuve) to capture the scale and the intimate psychological struggle.
  • Visual Style: Earthy, dusty, and high-contrast, utilizing wide shots for the grand scale of the battles and extreme close-ups for Pheidippides’s internal, physical battle.
  • Music: A sparse, propulsive, and percussive score that emphasizes the rhythmic running and escalating tension.

Themes

  • Endurance as Warfare: The idea that dedication and physical resilience can be as decisive as weapons.
  • The Power of the Message: The word and the news being the final, most crucial weapon.
  • Legacy and Sacrifice: How an individual’s ultimate sacrifice can forge a legacy that endures for millennia (the origin of the modern marathon).

ACTOR: Sean Drolet Lloyd

Sean Drolet Lloyd is an actor who has credits in the following three projects:

  • Monetary Worth
  • Goodbye Edna
  • Old Scratch

Setting: A bustling coffee shop, a few days after Sean’s casting as Loki in a new “Valhalla” movie has been announced. Joe Jukic, an actor friend, is meeting Sean for coffee.

Characters:

  • Sean Drolet Lloyd: Excited but also a bit overwhelmed by the new role.
  • Joe Jukic: Enthusiastic and slightly envious (in a good way) of Sean’s big break.

(Joe is already at a table, scrolling on his phone when Sean walks in, carrying two coffees.)

Joe: Sean! My man! Looking like a god already, eh?

Sean: (Grinning, puts the coffees down and sits opposite Joe) Jukic. Good to see you. And please, let’s not get ahead of ourselves. I haven’t even tried on the helmet yet.

Joe: Details, details! I saw the announcement. “Sean Drolet Lloyd Cast as Loki in Valhalla.” Dude, seriously, congratulations! That’s… that’s massive.

Sean: Thanks, man. It still feels a bit surreal, to be honest. I mean, Loki. The God of Mischief. It’s a huge character.

Joe: Huge is an understatement. And in Valhalla? That whole concept sounds epic. Are they doing a fresh take on the Norse myths? Or more like a… what’s the word… deconstruction?

Sean: From what I understand, it’s a bit of both. It’s not strictly historical or even strictly mythological in the sense of adhering to every single saga. It’s more about the philosophical underpinnings of Valhalla, the warriors striving for glory, and then Loki… well, Loki being Loki. He’s the wrench in the machine, the trickster who challenges the very ideals of what Valhalla represents.

Joe: I can see you in that. You’ve always had that mischievous glint in your eye, even when you’re playing the straight man. Plus, the hair! Instant Loki, no wig necessary.

Sean: (Laughs, running a hand through his curly red hair) That’s what the director said! Apparently, it was a selling point. “Natural chaos,” he called it.

Joe: Brilliant! So, how are you approaching him? Are you going for the charming villain, the sympathetic anti-hero, or full-on chaotic evil?

Sean: That’s the challenge, isn’t it? Loki is all of those things, sometimes in the same scene. He’s not purely evil, but he’s definitely not good. He’s driven by a complex mix of resentment, a desire for recognition, and a profound sense of being an outsider. I think the key is finding the humanity, or rather, the Asgardianity, in his mischief. Making his motives understandable, even when his actions are destructive.

Joe: That’s deep, man. Sounds like you’ve been doing your homework.

Sean: Non-stop. Reading everything I can get my hands on about Norse mythology, watching every portrayal of Loki, from comics to classical interpretations. The script is phenomenal, but it also gives me a lot of room to play. It’s less about strict adherence to a pre-existing persona and more about exploring the essence of what makes Loki tick in this specific Valhalla.

Joe: So, no pressure, then. Just embody a millennia-old trickster god in an entirely new cinematic universe. Easy peasy.

Sean: (Takes a sip of coffee, a wry smile playing on his lips) Just trying to make it my own, you know? Not just mimic what’s been done before. I want to bring a fresh perspective to his cunning, his charm, and especially his vulnerability. Because even a god of mischief has his moments of doubt.

Joe: I have no doubt you’ll crush it. Seriously, this is huge. You deserve it, man. Years of grinding, and now you get to literally raise hell in Valhalla.

Sean: (Chuckles) Hopefully, it’ll be more mischief than hell-raising. But thank you, Joe. It means a lot. Now, tell me, what have you been up to? Any exciting auditions?

Joe: (Leans back, a grin spreading across his face) Well, funny you should ask…

Scarface II: Libertad

Here’s a revised movie treatment for SCARFACE II: LIBERTAD, incorporating the octopus scene and the falling apart shoes:


TITLE: SCARFACE II: LIBERTAD LOGLINE: Before he was the King of Miami, young Antonio Montana fights to survive the suffocating grip of Castro’s Cuba, transforming from a street-level hustler into a ruthless survivor destined for exile. GENRE: Crime Drama / Period Thriller SETTING: Havana, Cuba (1978-1980) PREMISE: A prequel to Brian De Palma’s 1983 masterpiece, detailing the origin story of Tony Montana.


THE TONE Gritty, humid, and claustrophobic, but with moments of stark, almost surreal desperation. The vibrant colors of pre-revolution Havana are now muted, peeling, and patched over with utilitarian greys, military olive greens, and the omnipresent red of Communist propaganda. The atmosphere is one of constant surveillance and decay, where a simple meal becomes a luxury, and survival is a daily battle. This film focuses on the psychological toll of scarcity and the slow erosion of a man’s soul under pressure.

THE CHARACTER: ANTONIO MONTANA (Timothée Chalamet) At 21, Antonio is lean, hungry, and possesses a simmering, volcanic rage. He is intelligent but uneducated, burdened by a deep resentment for a system that preaches equality while delivering only privation. He loves his sister Gina fiercely and has a strained, complex relationship with his deeply religious mother. He is not yet “Tony the Gangster”; he is Antonio the survivor, a rat navigating a sinking ship, whose outward swagger masks a core of profound insecurity and a desperate need for more.


TREATMENT OUTLINE

ACT I: THE SQUEEZE

Havana, 1978. The Revolution’s promise has soured into rationing and paranoia.

ANTONIO MONTANA (Chalamet) works a dead-end job on the docks by day, his back aching, his stomach rumbling. By night, he is a small-time jinetero (hustler), navigating the back alleys of Old Havana. He procures things that don’t officially exist: American cigarettes, nylon stockings, penicillin, all bartered or stolen. He operates in the shadows of crumbling colonial grandeur, constantly dodging the CDR (Committees for the Defense of the Revolution)—the omnipresent neighborhood spy network.

His motivation is his family. They live in a cramped tenement. His mother, MAMA MONTANA, prays constantly and begs Antonio to accept their lot. His younger sister, GINA (16), is bright-eyed and stifled by the regime’s restrictions; Antonio vows that one day they will have the world. He buys her a cheap, gaudy necklace he hustled, a small symbol of his promise.

One evening, after a particularly meager day, Antonio manages to get his hands on a small, poached octopus from a fisherman. He brings it home, hoping for a decent meal. As he and his family sit around the worn table, silently eating the tough, rubbery flesh, Antonio tries to force down a piece. The texture, the taste of desperation, chokes him. He looks at his mother and sister, their faces gaunt in the dim light. He can’t stand it. He slams his fist on the table.

“This is all we get? This calamar from the sewage?” he seethes, staring at the tentacles on his plate, a primal disgust in his eyes. “We deserve more! Much more!”

His anger frightens Mama Montana. But Gina looks at him with a flicker of understanding, a shared desire for escape.

Antonio’s ambition, his raw hunger, draws the attention of RAFAEL “EL GATO” MENDEZ, an aging, pre-revolution gangster now running a sophisticated black market ring, largely tolerated by corrupt officials. El Gato sees Antonio’s fearlessness, his innate ability to size up people and situations. He takes Antonio under his wing, showing him the deeper currents of the black market. Antonio learns that power isn’t money in a place where money means little; power is having what others are desperate for.

Antonio quickly rises, moving bigger shipments—stolen beef, gasoline, even forbidden vinyl records. He tastes real money, albeit worthless pesos, but it buys influence and a better life for his family. He can finally buy his mother real medicine, proper shoes for Gina. But Antonio starts to dress with a small, defiant flash, drawing stares. His own shoes, however, are worn to threads. One day, during a tense street deal, as he tries to make a quick escape, the sole of his shoe tears completely away, flapping uselessly. He curses, almost falling, a flash of humiliation and rage across his face. He kicks it off, limping away, vowing to never be so poor again. This incident fuels his desire for “the goods,” for unshakeable material security.

He also attracts the cold, unblinking attention of CAPTAIN VERA SOTO (Ministry of the Interior), a true believer in the Revolution who views men like Antonio as capitalist parasites to be purged.

ACT II: THE SCAR

  1. The economy worsens. Desperation on the streets hits a fever pitch.

Antonio is now El Gato’s top earner. His arrogance grows, fueled by small victories. He bristles under El Gato’s cautious approach. Antonio wants to move into the most dangerous commodity of all: human beings. He wants to facilitate escape routes to Florida.

El Gato, knowing the ruthlessness of the regime when it comes to “traitors,” forbids it. Antonio, seeing the desperation, ignores him and cuts a side deal with a network of hopeful emigrants to smuggle a dissident professor out of the country.

It’s a trap, set by Captain Soto, aided by a jealous rival within El Gato’s crew. The operation is ambushed in the labyrinthine alleys of Old Havana. In a chaotic shoot-out—Antonio’s first real taste of gun violence—he kills a soldier to escape, the sound of the gun deafening, the smell of blood shocking.

He is eventually hunted down and captured. Captain Soto doesn’t just arrest him; she wants to break him. Antonio is thrown into a brutal political prison, a damp, overcrowded hellhole where food is scarce and hope is a luxury. He endures weeks of solitary confinement and brutal interrogation. Here, the last vestiges of his innocence are stripped away. He realizes that in this world, ideals get you killed. Only ruthlessness survives.

During a prison riot, sparked by a desperate political prisoner, Antonio doesn’t pick a side. He uses the chaos to his advantage, settling scores. He corners the snitch who set him up in the cramped prison yard, silencing him with a rusty shiv. In the ensuing struggle, Antonio receives a nasty knife wound across his face—a deep gash from temple to cheekbone—the origin of his infamous scar. He tastes his own blood, mixes with the grime and fear. He emerges from the ordeal changed: colder, eyes dead, a predator refined by captivity. He is no longer Antonio; he is becoming Tony.

He is released back onto the streets due to overcrowding, but he is now a marked man, known to the authorities as dangerous “anti-social scum.” He wears his scar like a badge, a warning.

ACT III: EL ÉXODO

April 1980. The Peruvian Embassy Crisis erupts, and Fidel Castro, in a stunning move, declares the port of Mariel open for anyone who wishes to leave the “socialist paradise.”

Chaos erupts in Havana. It is Antonio’s only chance. He rushes to El Gato, demanding the money he is owed—and more—to buy passage for his family. El Gato, terrified by the collapsing social order and knowing Antonio is now a magnet for trouble, refuses and pulls a gun. Antonio, without hesitation, doesn’t just kill his mentor; he does it with a chilling efficiency, takes all the cash, and pockets El Gato’s ornate gold watch. The transformation is complete.

Antonio races against time to get Mama and Gina to the port. The streets are bedlam—looting, fighting, families being torn apart. Captain Soto is at the docks, a grim reaper overseeing the chaotic processing, ensuring “upstanding citizens” don’t slip through with the “riffraff.”

Antonio bribes a boat captain to take his mother and sister first, knowing their relatively clean records (compared to his) will get them through faster. He shares a final, intense goodbye with Gina, pressing a wad of cash into her hand and repeating his promise that he is right behind them, his eyes hard but with a flicker of the old love.

As Mama and Gina board a rickety vessel, Soto spots Antonio in the milling crowd, the fresh scar on his face unmistakable. A desperate chase ensues through the crush of thousands of desperate refugees on the pier. Cornered near the treacherous water, Antonio engages in a brutal, visceral fight with Soto. He doesn’t kill her with a gun, but uses the chaos and the churning propellers of a departing boat, drowning her in the filthy harbor water—a final, symbolic rejection of the land that tried to drown him. He watches her struggle, without pity, before her body disappears beneath the waves.

Antonio, bleeding, exhausted, and with a fresh, raw hatred in his heart, forces his way onto one of the last dilapidated shrimp boats leaving the harbor, trampling over others in his desperation.

FINAL IMAGE:

The boat is impossibly crammed with the unwanted of Cuba—criminals, the mentally ill, and political dissidents. Antonio stands at the stern, looking back at the receding coastline of Cuba under a dark, stormy sky. The stench of salt, sweat, and fear hangs heavy.

He has nothing. No money (what he had is gone, used for bribes), no family by his side, just the clothes on his back, the fresh scar on his face, and an inferno in his gut. Yet, as the boat turns toward the open sea and the faint promise of American lights on the distant horizon, a terrifying, hungry smile slowly spreads across his face. It’s not joy, but a grim, resolute ecstasy.

He will never eat octopus again. His shoes will never fall apart again. He will get what is coming to him.

*Cut to Black. Cue the ominous synth baseline.*